Crossing boundaries their infidelity..
Melds passion lingering kiss,
Intertwine body sways,
Soft curvature scented in white lace.
Hair tugged gently he caresses..
Exploring hourglass contours,
fragile delicacy intises,
nape of rivers explore.
Author notes
"Crossroads"
Adult inspired image
A contest entry
- Adult Semi - Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
1350 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice job. I love it when I read words that flow so well and provide a simple, sensual rhythmic quality. The image you create is subtle and yet sexual without going over-the-top. (I think it's easy to go over-the top with pieces like this...) I enjoyed this.
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You did a beautiful job with this prompt. Sensual & beautiful all in one poem..
Excellent job with the prompt & your poem
good luck
kat
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Beautifully done sissy. Best of luck in the contest.
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Ohhhhhhhhhh love this ~ very sensually penned with excellent taste ~ my favorite ~ sensual can be written tastefully ~ bravo dear friend ` best of luck in the contest
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