Not even the night,
can hide your light...
Your view is calm as clear skies,
unexpected and full of duty,
from the fixing of your eyes,
you shine with inward beauty,
and pirece through the darkness within,
others-
as you were prieced for sin...
You are but a simple man yet I'm seeing,
a super real lovely being-
Your love truns the universe,
you're so in unison with God's art,
this devotion, this flower, this verse,
I give from the depths of my heart...
From the fixing of your eyes,
all my sins you sweetly pardon,
O love please reconize,
me and call me to your garden,
reconize me-
reconize me-
and call me to your garden,
without sorrow...
Author notes
PHOTO CREDITS BY ME
A contest entry
- the darkness... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended August 27, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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O love please reconize,
me and call me to your garden,
reconize me-
reconize me-
and call me to your garden,
without sorrow...
If our heart could channel
the spoken word
it would
call out
these lines
hugs Moony
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you are right sweet poetess
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You heard it whispering
to you
you channeled your heart
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Beautiful in its pleading ...
the poem translated the yearning of the flower for the Sun. Passionate in its execution.
Well done, Poetess.
Myra -
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you translated this perfect. I had not though of that when I posted the photo and poem.
Thank you for seeing
this poem through divine eyes poetess
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Ah..you have created the light around the deep of the darkness and that is the truth of your poetry here..well done...
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Emotional, deep write
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