“Willing To (Give In)”
I've never felt more confused
Than when I'm with you
Mixed signals and mixed emtions
Which ones do I act on?
Just when I got it figured out
In my head, the line changes
I'm misled
Never been in this position before
When I tell you that, you seem to
Close the door?
Pre-Chorus:
We could be so good together
Not sure if we'd make it through the weather
But we could try until the next storm...
Chorus:
I'm willing to give into you
I'm willing to give into the moment
I'm willing to give into your kiss
If your willing to, give this a try
This is a first for me, I admitted
But if for your touch I thirst
You're always pulling me in
And pushing me away
Why does my experience
Come into play?
Why won't you answer my call
Why does it hurt so much, yet into you
Is where I want to fall?
Pre-Chorus:
We could be so good together
Not sure if we'd make it through the weather
But we could try until the next storm...
Chorus:
I'm willing to give into you
I'm willing to give into the moment
I'm willing to give into your kiss
If your willing to, give this a try
Not sure if we'd make it through the weather
But we could try until the next storm...
I'm willing to give into you, if you'll give into me...
Author notes
Just something I'm working on right now, new song..
A contest entry
- songs by mitchie.
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Comments
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This song is just fantastic- I totally get your feelings oozing from each and every line- especially this part -
Why won't you answer my call
Why does it hurt so much, yet into you
Is where I want to fall?
Hmm.. maybe you can try lengthening the other parts before reaching the chorus to tell a more complete story? I don't know..it's your song after all
Great job nonetheless!
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I really like this. I feel like I can relate so much and reading this brings up memories. I like the way you've written this and the phrases that you've used. Awesome write.
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Humm the tone of the song is very much conversational bringing the two way communication..and that is strength of this wonderful piece..well donbe..
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ok.....i will.....
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