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In the Mists of Time

my name is destiny fullfiled
I am your journeys' end
my love is full of passion
deeply thrilled like a fire
my love full of passion you ignite

no more worries, come to me
no reason to reach out far
I am your destiny. my love for
you is endless, what a  thrill

whirling winds of passions
flow with chills. me and you
traveling in the mists of times
with passion. I stole your
heart and you stole mine

as we travel in our worlds
you carried me in your heart
blessed I am, in your heart I am reborn
down on a bed of roses you laid me
you removed all of the thorns

I forever will be yours and  true to you
my romance I give to caress you
and in your eyes I see my destined life
because you are truly the love of my dreams
you are truly my dearest and forever mine



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  • Soft-Rain
    August 15, 2008

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    Legend

    Aw very romantic! A beautiful poem filled with excitemement,passion.
    This was very enjoyable to read!
    Again very beautiful,

    hugs
    ~Lisa~


    • theburninglegend silver member
      August 15, 2008
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      Hey

      Look who finally decided to joint the GANG, lol just kidding, so how have you been, long time no talk!!! oh well I have been busy and not on my computer all of the times, well thanks for the comment and yes I tried my best to flatter some females out there, lol not my intentions though, well glad to hear from you, hope you are doing Good and everything is well with the Family

      ***Hugs**
      thelegend


      • Soft-Rain
        August 15, 2008
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        lol

        Ummm is not this a contridiction,

        yes I tried my best to flatter some females out there, lol not my intentions though,

        heehee!
        Well you i am sure will succeed! You are a good man any woman would be blessed to have you!

        The family is fine. Today is the day 7 hours of surgery for dad 3 way bypass and something about his lungs.
        So trying to keep busy. I cant be with my parents because i am in charge of things at home. I know you know how that feels.

        Yea i need to write something hmmmm romantic? erotic? or sad?
        Who know going to engage brainn now lol!

        Hugs my friend

        ~Lisa~


  • Genesis
    August 15, 2008

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    I like this. I like the bed of roses reference in fourth stanza. I also really like the last two lines of the poem. Thank you for sharing, Legend.
    --Genesis.


    • theburninglegend silver member
      August 15, 2008
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      Genesis

      hey thanks for your comment. You have been hiding? where did you go? lol well I will see if I have something to enter if not I will just write a brand new poem to enter. well Thanks buddy have a good day and Good luck with the contest.

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