I drew on my jeans
afraid to be heard
my fingertips traced
every heartbeat, each word
I drew them in silence
in wonder, unsure
'til I drew them off
in answer to you
A contest entry
- crimson remorse by PersephoneInWinter.
300 points, ended August 19, 2008, 17 entries
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I really like this short piece. it has awesome imagery in it.
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This flows really well.
Best of luck!
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great play on words, which leads us on with the suggestion that you are drawing in the artistic sense. You actually mean something else and it's sensuous but tasteful.
Good luck in the contest.
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Intriguing
hmm.. I like this a lot, but I'm not sure I'm getting the right message.
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