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[In the darkness]

In the darkness you broke through my shield
Too young to say no, but too naïve to know anything else
I was used and broken through but you were in the dark
You kept the secrets from her so she never knew who you really were

In the darkness I hurt myself
Too broken inside to know how anything but pain felt
I kept your secret for too long and even the darkness couldn’t take it
All those years of mine, you left wasted
We kept our secret but now it’s gone too far
Because everyone knows who you really are

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  • she still smiles x gold member
    August 28, 2008
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    Awwww *tear*
    Ilovedthisss.

    *In the darkness you broke through my shield
    Too young to say no, but too naïve to know anything else.

    OMGGG. That's exactly how I was before!!! I can't tell you how long I've been looking for poems to describe what I've been through, and yours are just completely perfect!

    Marvelous =]

    <3


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    The truth is the essence of the inside of the heart ..and that is the image of the darkness sometimes..this is what the life is..well stated verse...