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You'll never know

Only skin deep
When you're diving in
Tell me your story
Make me weep

Only skin deep
The emotions you show
Skipping chapters
To and fro

Follow the breadcrumbs
You will soon see
Past Present Future
My story what it has led me to be

Lash out in anger
With emotion skin deep
The anger the rage
Which more you hold so deep

Fall down with tears
The ones you've been wanting to cry
Show me the rivers
And tell me why

Beg for forgiveness
Again
And
Again
The screams of your anguish
I can hear your pain

You'll never understand
And this is only Skin Deep
You'll never know really
Why I wail and shriek

Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback

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  • Sam-I-Am
    August 24, 2008
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    nice rhyme, that was good. Yo rhythm's coming along nicely too. Cool
    Sam