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"Eternal Agony"

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Buried! Six feet under!
Endless fornication.
My life so torn asunder
during its brief duration.

The Savior offered me salvation
and I blindly, turned away
so intent was I for pleasures
in all my sinful ways.

Suicide in desperation,
I thought death was a conclusion.
I sought a peaceful separation.
but my hell’s no mere illusion!

Alas, I yearn for my return
to a world amongst the living
although I know, it won't be so
for Satan's unforgiving!

Damnation's never severed
and I will suffer endlessly.
Hell's Inferno lasts forever--
Alas, no hope for me!

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Poems About Hell
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  • penman gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    Excellent

    A wonderful creation for the contest. And so deserving of the bronze. Congratulations


  • daviscth silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    You did a great job with this prompt!! This is filled with wonderful rhyme as always and the imagery is perfect. Good luck in the contest.