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No Use Fighting It

Melting flames encase us all.
We stand alone, terrified.

Evil laughter rises to the ceiling.
We come closer together . . .

Then suddenly we embrace it.
And live in the world known as Hell.


Hell is my world.
Everyday, I'm walking through fire,
The falmes licking my body.
But no pain do I feel.

I've been asked if I want to leave,
People try to drag me out,
I'll be trapped here forever so what's the point?

I've accepted my fate and won't run away . . .

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  • Michael H.
    August 14, 2008
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    I like what you added here. I wish this would have been in the contest. This is good.


    • EbilyCuteKitte
      August 14, 2008
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      Yeah...

      Thank you. When I was first writing though, it was like half of me was writing, the other half of me was...not here lol


  • Riamh
    August 14, 2008
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    Very visual and very dark.
    well done.