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Quantum Ocean

Humanity will ascend,

beings grow in light.

Manifest, cosmic ocean;

possess the same sight.

 

Indigo rises,

connects; adheres.

Guided by children,

music of spheres.

 

Flowing consciousness,

ephemeral waves.

Pisces rest,

brings in a new age.

 

When Christ arises,

blind will see.

Flowers blossom,

pure divinity.

 

Minds of many,

truth will destroy,

deception, Antichrist.

Will be no more.

 

When universe,

beneath the skin.

illuminates,

we begin again.

 

When hearts,

will think;

minds will feel.

Humanity will close the seal

 

I believe,

opens doors.

I know,

when wisdom soars.

 

 

 

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    May 13
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    Your poem in our shared contest shows off your talent for rhythm and rhyme, my friend. Good job.


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 3

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    You have taken the words of the Maya culture and moulded into this write, they also predicted the end of the antichrist, deception and deceit. The humanrace embraces honor and life's values once more in the 5th year.
    well done and thank you for entering!


  • Dark Otter
    November 26, 2008

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    I am confused!

    I don't know why I like this, I just do. Is is the images, the style or the prismatic colors of your thought? Somethings defy analysis or do not need it. Thanks for sending me some 'rainbow' love.


  • maa gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    wonderfully enlighened and enlightening thoughts here in response to the contest-prompt ... I love the idea of hearts thinking and minds feeling ... maybe that is the solution to all problems we are currently facing ... a little friend of mine once told me : "you are not only head-smart, but also heart-smart" ... that was the kindest compliment I have ever received, and it's worth even more, since it comes from an innocent child ...
    you are also a heart-smart lady, kathleen, and the universe beneath your skin has so many twinkling stars and rainbows to bless us all every time we get in touch with you ...

    thank you so much for sharing your gift,
    marion


  • Providence
    August 15, 2008

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    "When universe,

    beneath the skin.

    illuminates,

    we begin again."

    Oh my sweet poet! How lovely!

    Marianne


  • ourgirlFriday
    August 14, 2008

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    This is nice!

    An interesting take on the prompt; I feel like it's related to the song "Age of Aquarius." But I love the positive view you have in this piece!


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    I love these words!

    When hearts,
    will think;
    minds will feel.
    Humanity will close the seal

    Pam




  • fathom me
    August 14, 2008
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    Religious or otherwise, I like the general thought here.. yearning for a humble world..


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 13, 2008
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    another beautifully..

    ..worded well thought out piece! Gosh sis, you are so very much blessed! keep the ink flowing!

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    August 13, 2008

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    Hello.

    This reads better than before, it is more balanced and more descriptive; that stick out line is still there, hahah, the seal one, but we write as we do. You have an interesting blend of Christianity / Spiritualism or could just be Gnostic Christianity, am sure I have said that before actually. The only thing we can say for a fact is the age will end, what comes with it; we believe what we do, and perhaps that will play some part in what happens, other things taking into consideration though. I wish you well in the contest.

    My regards.

  • goalsv
    August 13, 2008

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    awesome take on the prompt, so full of hope and written in such a poertic form. Loved the message of hope. If it would only be that way!


  • who iam
    August 13, 2008

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    Magnificently written!

    You dear lady have a gift!Your ministry in poetry is heartwarming and real.
    I thank you for sharing this write.It's one I'll keep in my memory bank.
    may God bless my friend.

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