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Sunrise

In the east,bright sun rising
Saying goodbye to the moon
To my eyes always surprising
Never out of tune

In a list

A contest entry

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  • AnanCat
    August 13, 2008

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    Yay..nice really.It reminded me of one of my poems"lovers who can never meet"I hope you read it if you have time.
    Good luck in the contest!