upon golden sands
we danced hand in hand
and in the beauty
of a horizon of gold
we found harmony
Author notes
Picture taken from:
http://media.bigoo.ws/content/layout/fantasy/fantasy_2.jpg
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Michael H..
390 points, ended August 13, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sought-After Dream!
Where every reader wants to be. You can almost feel the sand between your toes as your lover pulls you towards the waters edge, dancing merrily as the sun sets.
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It's only fitting that a 'golden' poem should garner a golden trophy. Such sweet sentiments in so few words is delightful to read.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Soft and serene words such as these send the mind to such a peaceful and restful place. This has all the comfort of being wrapped in a warm blanket on a cool night.
Driver X
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I adore the imagery here and the tender way in which you executed it and brought it forth for the reader to grasp. Awesome work! Good luck to you in the contest!
Midnight Lace
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What better thing for one to find at the wend of their journey than harmony. Your words paint a portrait all on their own.
~JLG
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No matter what kind of day one is having, this would certainly go far to lift ones spirits and give them hope where there might not otherwise be any. I like all that this implies and hope that you have many days and nights like this one here, as well as myself.
You surely have a way with words and I think the picture goes picture for an accompanianment.
TXCowgirl
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short and sweet ! i loved it ! wonderfully romantic and a beautiful picture :] your poem really connects to the picture ! great write !
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A short and sweet feel good poem. Such a pleasure to read!
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cute
Very sweet piece. The picture really adds, I think. Nice work.
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harmony is good to find, let the spirit shine and move along the colours of whichever beauty comes first in life and love
a good poem.
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