expectation hovers near possibilty’s edge,
where solar winds nod into milky way skies
and flights roll into deep ocean thought
Author notes
20 words
prompted by this picture:
http://media.bigoo.ws/content/layout/fantasy/fantasy_2.jpg
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Michael H..
390 points, ended August 13, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i see some wonderful room for wordplay here with your images..
expectation hovers near possibilty’s edge,
solar winds nod into milky's way
and flight rolls deep ocean thought
just a thought.. wonderful image
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hey. I understand laying off to recover balance. I left for 6 months. Ck back in with me, OK?
Always enjoyed our encounters, you inspire me.
Oh. About the poem; expectation always throws me. I'm trying to learn expectant, instead...
Hope is to be aware of potential; of possiblility; Faith is clinging to what you hope for, without the evidence most need. I'm being pedantic... Go look at your trees, and tell them helllo from me... -
Is this a song
I would love to see this as a chorus in a song, so where is the music.
Very nice work
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Very nice - especially liked 'ocean deep thought'
congats on the trophy
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Congrats on the Bronze.
"expectation hovers"
Cool personification.
"near possibility's edge"
Ah, yes...I can imagine a cliff here.
"solar winds"
Pretty!!
"deep ocean thought"
Well, that's superb.
I don't even use the word 'superb'...but this is.
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Jessica
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Nice comment, I think it's longer than the poem! Superb!
BTW - I'm going on vacation for two weeks, so I'll be absent from doing any writes. Try to stay out of trouble!
marlene
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This is really good.
I loved the phrase "winds nod."
Nice write.
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