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It Wasn't Love





If eagles didn't soar each time
a single embrace was felt,
it wasn't love.

If honey wasn't surpassed in taste
compared to each kiss shared,
it wasn't love.

If mountains didn't move;
if butterflies didn't rupture
the rapture within your stomach;
if warm rain didn't make you
smile, and sun rays make rainbows
overhead each time his precious
face was sought,

it wasn't love.





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  • new born
    January 31
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    I agree with curious lili. Perfection.


  • Curious LiLi
    August 13, 2008

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    Aww. The pretty words almost mask the sad truth.

    This is a great poem! I've read it like 6 times now. :]


  • charcoal
    August 13, 2008

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    beautiful write
    thank you so much for entering the contest