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fiery orb

fiery orb spins heat

into life on Earth

as men find new ways

to destroy the planet

and wage war

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  • Emerald Lass
    August 13, 2008
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    I just read this poem and it is what is happening in the newspaper which makes it a timely topic if I do say so myself.


  • individuality gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    ah no matter what we will all find new ways as a race - humanity - to find new and creative ways to find destruction