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New Ways

New ways, old ways,
that's the way my life plays.
Shopping and eating
and watching TV.
There's really not much
on the tube to see.

I might as well
carry myself to school.
Seeing my friends
would be so cool.
I'll sit at a desk
and take up space
and play with my cell phone,
see your face.

Now I need a car
so I can drive far...
When I feel like
cutting school.

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  • mcheadle
    August 26, 2008

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    This was so neat

    I really enjoyed your write. I did mine and wondered how far off mine would be you are cool with this write Good job...mac

  • mcheadle
    August 26, 2008
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    This was so neat

    I really enjoyed your write. I did mine and wondered how far off mine would be you are cool with this write Good job...mac


  • daviscth silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    LOL!!! You did a great job with this!!! I love the line about the cell phone. Thanks so much for posting.


  • individuality gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    Shopping and eating
    and watching TV.

    hahaha well i am stuffing my fat head with bagels right now so shopping and eating is a good one right now


  • Riamh
    August 13, 2008

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    You always make me smile!
    I love it.

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