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Shores

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The heart

will ever stroll serenely

on exquisite, exotic paths,

when mind

uses hope's travel agency,

for its minute vacations.

 

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  • marlene47 silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    A nice image -> serenely strolling heart. Clever -> mind using hope's travel agency for minute vacations. A good thing to keep in mind.
    marlene


  • StarEyes
    August 13, 2008

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    Oh my goodness my brother, This one brings me to my dream vacations, and the hope and love I find there more times than not. Thanks bubs!! You are the greatest!

    Best of luck in the contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • riley
    August 13, 2008

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    Hmm, I could use a hope travel agency right now. I love that concept. Good luck to you in the contest.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 13, 2008
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    good luck papa