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linger





we linger to talk until the crickets surround us, draining all color from the day






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  • Tercarro
    November 21, 2008

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    Romantic

    I really enjoyed this and saw myself in this picture not wanting to go home. Lovely images, even the sound of the crickets can be heard.


  • notorious gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    LoL...just one sentence...neat.

    Love 'draining' & the imagery.
    Is it just me, or do you have an affinity with crickets in your poems?


  • parenchma
    August 13, 2008

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    Marlene, I thought you were jewish- not blueish!
    It was the crickets that made me say that...
    I hear crickets all the time...
    Hope u r doin fine!