supposing moods without an air
darkly pushing the world aside
grasping life by the pumping heart
forgiving nothing and assuming all
solitude junkies occupy space
lives of cheating and insincere dares
mentally disorganized and without direction
nothing replaces all that was lost
isolation gives them comfort
chilling nights cover their thoughts
empty days become routine
life becomes worthless without dreams
Author notes
prompts 12 and 15
60 Words
A contest entry
- 24 Hour PIF - by Bear - by Arkbear.
500 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Solitude is seductive but can be too much of a good thing. One has to realize that and get out in the world sometimes even though solitude can give comfort as you say.
I like your write.
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Nice job on the two prompts....not sure about the first line, but the rest of this write is erie and plain to visualize.....good luck & God bless,
Bear ~
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