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Reach From Beneath

~*~
I'm all alone on Saturday night...
you're visiting your family
I long to feel your touch
I bend down and imagine you reaching
from beneath.
~*~

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Wow, it was tough putting this into only 25 words!

ImmortalCyclone (now kiwikrazi37) (Age 13)

My Wednesday Write! (Picture prompt--using only 25 words)

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  • Broken-Bones
    August 17, 2008

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    You used your limited words really well and I liked your take on the prompt. You really captured the longing. Good work x


  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 13, 2008

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    Well, I surely like it ! Your take on the prompt was amazing, and I loved every word, honestly =) Keep it up ! ♥


  • Seven Kinky
    August 13, 2008

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    Wow...twenty five words? I wouldn't have been able to do it! Congrats. You evoke lovely imagery, too. Great write.