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if poets were terrorist

If poets were terrorist :
Then the pen would be their gun
And the words would be bullets
Verses will become blasts
Paper would be our headquarters
Our chief would be audience
And the target would applause       

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  • Shades of Pale silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    why this

    i like it but why poets and terrorist? think about it but great work


  • Laughing Buddh
    August 13, 2008
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    lol.....loved the last line!


  • nichtmich silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    Wonderful idea. I like the way you build upon the original idea to the last line! Great work!


  • kiwikrazi37
    August 13, 2008

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    This is very creative. I enjoyed it a lot, especially the "paper would be our headquarters" part Hehe. Great job, good luck!