Of an unwanted birth,
rejection of childhood,
fierce conflict to make,
to be finished in every direction,
constructed by dualities,
precariousness of good and evil,
of positive or negative sides,
of a creature's survival.
With a beating heart under belly,
love and rejection dance,
abandonment of all wrongs,
infinite curls of pinching suffering.
Idealization by society,
reducing value of an innocence,
love objects turning in a circle,
scars of skin dressed by wounds.
But now to give birth this pain
to choose a silent revival
to tint with one thousand colours
in a challenge tucked in him, forever.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt 4: ~tucked in him
98 Words
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie- Prompts; 15 entries by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
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Wow; this was deep. Beautiful imagery and metaphors. Excellent use of poetic devices.. the meaning behind such brilliant & big words is amazing. Love where you took this prompt. --definately thought out of the box.
Best of luck & thank you for entering
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