tears fall from my eyes once again
its been awhile since they've been dry
the monster ive tryed to restrain
lingers inside of me
waiting to break free
i feel prisioner to my own darkness
chained and forgotten
its as if im lost inside my mind
i contemplate death
wondering if finally my pain will end
its a battle ive been fighting for 4 years
but now im tired
all i want is to be at ease
even if it is 6ft below
Author notes
this is semi-old, i wrote it a few months back but the words still hold true to how i feel. not too much the death thing except for when im in a mood.
What did you think
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Depressions sucks, plain and simple >.<
I think everyone deals with it in their own way, you know? Some show it and some don't. Some fight and some simply give in. Just keep fighting ♥ I know what it's like all too well.
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I like how you explain being a prisoner in your own mind. I think that this is a little melodramatic though. I think adding the time in there brings more perspective, though. Overall, it is a really good poem. Keep it up!
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Depression is a butt plug to deal with. Pardon the informality. It's getting late and I'm losing my ability to sound refined. That being said, I know how you feel. The best I can offer is to make a change for yourself instead of waiting on things to get better. I've found that I have to step up and grab life by the proverbial balls when things fall into the toilet. Cheers to finding happiness.
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i like the way you said you were lost in your mind. i often feel that it is a prision you cant escape. again i liked this poem a lot.
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