This meek madness
you give me.
sometimes I believe
when feel you of such form
that I've already conquered world,
don't notice your absence,
that I'm a goddess, next to you,
wet and air,
but this time..
different...
tintinnabulation
quivering shivering,
enhancing palpitations.
Is it Love ?
Author notes
Prompt: " I guess I'll never know if it was love"
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST by charcoal.
600 points, ended August 13, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like the sound of that word
tintinnabulation
i hope you find the answer to your question and it turns out to be just what you want it to be
thank you so much for entering the contest -
The wording you chose makes it feel a lot like lust. But kind of like you're in love with it.
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