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The Light, Hung Over

Yawning pupils let light in,
Unwrapping shadows by opening bars,
Once closed and reaching to the window pane.
When able to come in, light,
Bathed and flowed into his dist- filled room,
But his hand shielded the sandy confetti,
And the light hung over.

The luminous paper guided
His pen, and he drew;
Birds whittling air with sharp treble,
Rivers ringing stone chimes passed,
Over.

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  • BabyBun silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Hi - thanks for entering my contest - I enjoyed this. Best of luck!