your body is my masterpiece
i can paint you if you please
those lovely curve and lines
my brush and ink would never whine
as i follow your body trail
there is something inside that i feel
those sensous touch im longing
would you want to are willing?
my paintbrush has its own mind
i cant assure you it would be kind
this brush of mine loves to travel
on myterious places loves to wander
i want to your artist i just wish
could you be my masterpiece?
Author notes
painting by: ken smith
A contest entry
- Make words steam - PIF (ADULTS ONLY) Picture Prompt by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended August 18, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
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Oh this does appeal to the artist I am. A brilliant take on the prompt, as well as a clever use of artistic ideas to create setting I wish I could have in my studio... oh well I can dream!
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Sweet like a song here, teasing too
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It's interesting but I have to say I think each of the last lines are not as strong as the rest of the stanzas. But a great premise
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hank you for your entry, good luck
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your welcome,its my pleasure.
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Whoa!!!! Hell yeah!!
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