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39 and holding

Missing image

Birthday?

She went that a way

Ben and Jerrys

helping her down that 'Rocky road'

tonight.

 

Sipping white wine

listening to cheatin songs

wondering where she went wrong

Turning 39 all alone.

 

 

Taking a bubble bath ponderin

this and that a little crying,

sipping wine eating all the ice cream

she wants for once.

 

White wine cheatin songs warm water

puts the Birthday Girl out

not as young as she once was.

So small and so alone in that big old bath tub.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • nichtmich silver member
    August 14, 2008

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    Oh! A sad look at aging. Not that it can't be sad. Love the self indulgent pampering, we all need it once in awhile. Great work!


  • Melissa Burns
    August 14, 2008

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    Beautiful picture! Beautiful entry, it's kind of playing your emotions, you're not sure how to feel almost. I loved this though, thanks for entering!!!


  • arafura
    August 13, 2008
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    Well done... 39 is a lovely age.


  • wildfiredreamer
    August 13, 2008
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    this is good
    love the take and the picture

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    take care
    Rhonda

  • celadia
    August 13, 2008
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    I enjoyed this piece, it sounded a little lonely but not desperate. Good luck in the contest.

  • dillpickle62
    August 13, 2008
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    Wow!

    Softly sad but beautiful.... 39? Still a spring chicken.
    Best wishes in this contest.

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