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Neverland

I want to sleep
but then I'd wake
its a brand new day
and I'm walking away

its moving day
its more defining than graduation
a twelve hour gravitation
to the pull of growing up
neverland
its never enough

What do you think of me?

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 13, 2008

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    Neverland...quaint idea. As for things never being enough, I suppose that's just the human condition. Interesting write.


  • Solidified
    August 13, 2008

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    I think you're gifted.

    I'm in neverland I won't leave, and 12 hours sure won't make the difference for me. Good job expressing yourself.