he doesn't even know
everytime i fall
its him that i call
he cahe is my hero
but ll himself stupid
but its him that i need
he treat me as a lil sister
but no hes not even brother
how could this hero save me
now, that i fall for him
how can i make him realize
that hes the hero of my dreams
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A contest entry
- Hero by takemypainaway.
400 points, ended August 27, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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i think this poem has a good point but has ALOT of grammar mistake which makes it hard to understand
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salamat po sa matiyaga mong pagcomments skin hehehe,khit ung ibang gawa ko ay super masaker ang ganda prin comment mo.lols ang baet nyo tlga!!!!
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Sad and sweet here, full of longing and heartache...
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