I have been loved
by man
and monster
Who has hurt me worse?
Man, of course,
for the monster was a figment
of my reality
and the man
my fantasy
Author notes
picture prompt provided by contest holder
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh how wonderful!! you really did such a great job here!! I really loved the flow and the ending shocked me! lol. I love it when that happens!
thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck!!
Angel
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Ah, thn my poem touched you.....thank you.....
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Ah indeed! I have to concur! Sorry its been so long since I've read! You haven't missed a lick mom!
Much love,
Frogz~
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Hi there dear heart. I have cut down on penning, but not because the passion is not there, jsut lfie kind of getting in the way.
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brief and oh so true. .good write C BEST OF LUCK X
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ty, Peter.
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all I can say is wow
the words brings feelings that are hard to explain
and yet you have
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Ah, perhaps it is because I lvied life to its fullest... and dare to write it?
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Oooh I love a poem that makes me think and then get to the end and say Damn! I didn't see that coming
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lol....wow, I surprised even you? I thought I was pretty predictable.
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Remarkable.
What a neat twist. I love this.. I lived in illusion once, thinking I loved a man and finding out it was a monster. Well, maybe not that extreme haha but I totally know what this poem is going for.
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ah, those different levels of monstrous.....there are those, indeed. ty for your comments.
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