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Trainyard magic

Trainyard Magic

In the trainyard, the boxcars sit

Ive been sneaking in since I was a kid

with a bag of paint and a camera for flicks

I paint a name either long or quick

as I walk the freightlines, treasures I find

pieces of artwork, so many kinds

pictures of the past, pieces done by the greats

rare writings and monkiers all on these freights

Ive met some men who ride the rails

some carry streak markers and love to share tales

some are just riding, all on their own

turning up wherever, which is where they call home

theres a real kind of magic within the yards

a hidden museum, travelling afar

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  • coddledsoul
    August 24, 2008
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    hmmm a nice piece overall best of luck in the contest


  • etoile
    August 18, 2008
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    this is well written
    i like the form
    goodluck in the contest


  • jscribbled
    August 12, 2008
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    wow, that sounds really fun.
    I want to experience this.