Burning out of my pores the sweet smell of incense.
As the Aroma releases every sigh within.
My life escapes as I slowly breathe your sunlight.
Like the fuel of love releasing the pleasure.
Your warmth sun-kisses my browning flesh.
Causing my soul to shine like a thousand stars.
Lighting up the Universe with the sensation of your touch.
Taking me to the next faze of desire.
Releasing the ecstasy of life, slowly darkness set in a slumber.
Overwhelming eternally, with the fragrance of love.
Author notes
esroddo Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie- Prompts; 15 entries by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I enjoyed the passion of your imagery here
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Bravo well done
A wonderful tale of love and lust, I feel the passion in your words "lighting up the universe with the sensation of your touch" I have felt that before. This poem rings true for so many of us, many too shy to say. Thank you for sharing this with us, Boog
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Wow; this was so beautifully penned with passion & romance. Loved how you took this "sensually" .. you really did such an excellent job with this piece.
I am very impressed. Lovely imagery too.
Best of luck & thank you for entering
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