I close my eyes and can't open them,
My body becomes empty air, and my soul floats in it.
The clouds around me fade away.
The sun is a million flashlights
Combined in the dark night,
Shining so bright that I can't see anything else.
And as I reach the sun nothing hurts anymore.
Sunlight seeps into my body and into my lungs,
Escaping my throat. Finally,
I am breathing the sunlight that I am.
Author notes
Prompt 1: ~breathing your sunlight
-10 lines-/-75 words-
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie- Prompts; 15 entries by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww; what a peaceful write. So beautiful in your thoughts & descriptions.
Wondefully penned!
Best of luck & thank you for entering
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good job
For someone that doesn't like hidden meanings. You use a lot in ur poems. Maybe without knowing???
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Ok there are no words to describe my affection for this..lol.
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wow!!
me like!!!
hahahhaha
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