Resolving the knots that are still tied
Dissolving alienation
escaping who we are.
Guilty passions on paper
tendencies of breaking my arm.
Feeling this way so long so wrong.
Hopeful and ready for
illusion of youthful decadence
conclusion
ungraceful passion
yet
faithful lust
relative
in depth
thy
recessed
heart.
A contest entry
- How is your mood? Quicky by Meroza.
300 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
say what?
Comments
-
great reading
-
Not sure what to make of it, although it sounds like a stream of thought about some conflicting issues that I would guess most men have, the title speaks to this as well.
-
This poem onfuses me a bit, seems like you are confused as well judging by the words speaking around themselfes. All it really left me with was a confused mind.
Maybe try and take a second look at it?
Adding your comment:
