My name is Triple D and I’m coming to a coach near you
I’ll take all your worldly goods while you stare at my gazzu’s
You’ll wonder where your money's gone after you wake up in your tea
And think “How could such a busty girl have been smarter than me?”
My name is Triple D and I’m a proud Partner In Crime
My loyal friends in trouble are a treasure hard to find
I’ll smile at you sweetly as the powder does its job
But don’t you touch these mama’s or you’ll answer to my mob
Author notes
How do you spell gazzue? I cant find it in spell check! And did I spell triple right?
Anyways, this was really fun, I'm excited to see what else gets entered.
A contest entry
- Partners in crime group only please by Partners In Crime.
950 points, ended September 5, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Such very touching creation. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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lol, well i know the "d"s very well and can relate but hey, no fun not touching
awesome poem, best wishes in the contest.
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"I’ll smile at you sweetly as the powder does its job
But don’t you touch these mama’s or you’ll answer to my mob"
I don't know anything about spelling correctly Sarah...and I don't know nothing about gazzu's...
But I do know I liked this a lot...
XXJeannette
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LOL thanks for the awesome comment Wolf Mistress
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LOL, this is great, very funny matey
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Thanks for reading and commenting Andy
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funny, funny, Sarah... but since your entry has tripled your chances in the contest, are you sure you're not flaunting those triple D's to gain votes??!!
But then, don't we all?? Triple D's or not.
This is a really cute poem, good luck in the contest :
Dee
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Well if you want to know the answer to that just skip on over to wattles page.... http://allpoetry.com/poem/4520049
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oops...
sorry...that should have been a Triple D-ang good entry
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J aime,
Thats right keep on mixing, but warn us first so we can take cover LOL -
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hey, I got the perfect formula from that old snake doctore we ran across on the trail up in Oklahoma...next time will be a doozey so when I hollar 'fore'...run for cover
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Great entry...in fact that was a Double D-ang good entry...glad to know some one in this bunch has the where-with-all to pull off a good caper wtih out blowing the whole place up...and glad to hear from wings that the gang is alive adn kicking...I jsut can't seem to get that dang dyn-o-mite mixed right...but will keep trying as long as the gang doesn't mind the risk...Good luck in the contest...
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Fantastic
This is realy fantastic and you have "TRIPLED" your chance of placing in this contest.I will be looking forward to having you join the gang in the nest "BIG,BIG" Caper
coming up real soon.
And you are the first to know that " Ma Catz Barker and our explosive expert, are both alive and well and I know where they are hiding out and will reveal it soon.
Thank you for your entry and Good Luck in the contest.
ED.
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Great to know that our partners are alive and well! No sense people dying over a poorly timed pee
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ha ha ha...you are so right...
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And I was sure this was one of those hard drinking womanising Yee Hah Texas fellows from the Triple D ranch. Though on reflection it probably is him on the table with empty pockets (and head). The ‘Triple D’ factor in Australia (where I come from) would be referred to as big (or huge) norcs. There is Milk Company called Norco there. They specialized in cows with prominent udders on their posters, a connection was made. --- http://www.norco.com.au
That kind of thing is not rare in Australia. There is a well know Bra company here Hestia ---- http://www.hestia.com.au --- This isn’t a joke – the name is an acronym, 'Holds Every Size Tit In Australia' --- Few of the customers are offended and won't purchase (that's Andy's Australia).
Oh I almost forgot. I liked your poem it made me think, a good thing. (Thank you)
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I followed the links. I didnt see the huge utters but i did see the bra's. Maybe I'll order one. LMAO!
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this is so cute
good luck in the contest
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thank you Huntress for reading
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