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Hero

There's this boy I know
Goes by the name of Mr. Means
And I think everyone should get to hear
Just who he is to me

He's the guy who I'll always love
The one I'll never forget
The guy I know I can turn to
No matter when I know he'll do his best

What we have isn't a relationship
Relationship dont last as long
See me and Mr. Means, we're forever
No matter what's going on

He's my hero always has been
And God knows he better stay that way
I dont know where I'd end up
If I didnt have him showing me the way

He's the strength behind me
The candle that burn's so bright
He's the big brother that fait forgot
He's my big shiny knight

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option 5 my hero!

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  • Rock-Junkie
    August 31, 2008
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    exactly how I feel with mine!! this friend Ive known - since middle school - is practically my hero, and is exactly how I am with him as you've written in this poem. right-on-the-nose!! ~lol~ obviously, I relate to this, quite well. Great write and good luck in my contest!!


  • takemypainaway
    August 25, 2008
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    wow that is good athough the meaning is a lil un clear
    thank you for entering much love
    --kat


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    August 13, 2008
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    always good to have a knight in your corner