Yawning sun-streaked air with
golden shimmers in the deep sunset,
I stretch across soft fields of
emerald greens and soft yellows.
Sighing complacently, I swallow
my fears with realizations:
Life is beautiful...
Author notes
Prompt 1: ~breathing your sunlight
-perfectsunset
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie- Prompts; 15 entries by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love him ♥
Comments
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Wow; couldn't have said this better myself.
This was so beautiful in its brevity
& so elegantly conveyed,
I just loved it, oh & lovely imagery in this too!
"sun-streaked air"
Best of luck & thank you for entering
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i like the phrase yawning sun
never heard that before
i like the phrase "soft fields of emerald greens and soft yellows"
well life is beautiful but we do need reminders like this
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