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Loveless Automaton

I wish this robot had no heart
Then perhaps I shall sleep tonight
Maybe I could blow his fuse
Then everything will be alright

Tomorrow I will find the man
The creator of this automaton
And tell him all of his mistakes
And request this be redone

He desires to keep my heart
Beside his artificial one
I'm afraid I don't feel the same
I'm afraid I don't see the fun

The fact is that I'm done
With what this robot has to say
I'll make him kick the bucket
And throw his love away

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Gosh, I don't really want to talk about it...I've lost too much sleep over it anyway.

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  • jasminerose
    August 13, 2008
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    Well..Okay if you don't want to talk about it then I won't ask any questions!! Instead Sam, I will just say, I love how you penned this one, as inbetween the lines say just as much as the words written here!
    It is wonderful to read you as always!!
    And here's a .. just because
    Linda