emptiness I feel
in the pit of my stomach
Is it because I lost my muse?
or mabye my broken bones laying on the floor
is it because I am blind to the world around me?
or mabye my love for life
thoughts swirl around my head
yet I can't speak them
can't pen them
nothing I think is right
the emptiness turning into pain
a volcano erupting
but this earthquake in my body
makes me notice...
that im hungry
Author notes
haha off for a nightime snack :]
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- How is your mood? Quicky by Meroza.
300 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Awesomeness
ha, ha! this is very funny! it's hilarious! you made it so i wanted to read more... find out what was goin' on...
and the endin was just priceless! i loved it! nice job, and good luck!
-Adria/ pb fudge
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Well, I'm always hungry so I can't give you an answer. I haven't noticed the grumbly tummy for some time but I remember the sensation.
Good write.
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It started off a bit dark and the end, it made me fall of the chair laughing! Nighttime snack taste the best for some strante reason! This one really did suprize me, I didnt expect that ending at all! Excelent!
Best of luck
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