Senses toward time stop,
one does not know it until late -
too late; damage done.
Series often follow,
blindly into untimely death -
accidents occur occasionally.
Sweet children play -
hide & seek, tag, bloody Mary;
others sink further to oblivion.
Sitting, thinking, daring
judges to judge properly -
drive unstable souls away.
Author notes
12. Mentally Disorganized
...have no idea where this came from....*ponders*
I wrote another for this contest but went over the line limit, I believe the other is better than this but oh well. Link here ------> http://allpoetry.com/poem/4508495
60 words
A contest entry
- 24 Hour PIF - by Bear - by Arkbear.
500 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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with a dark take on the prompt
best of luck to you with your
poem here for this prompt
Riftkin
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Erie thoughts penned here....the abyss of the mind is deeper than you may think ~
Good luck and God bless,
Bear ~
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