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Ancient Reflections



She stood stock still,

holding the tattered truth

in her pale, shaking hands—

she had been normal once.



Staring at the tiny face,

she marveled at the pretty

girl with bleach-blond hair

and sparkling blue eyes.



No equation could connect

the beautiful child with

her own mousy brown hair

and dull, gray eyes.



Innocence was lost on her

with alphabet soup and

frosted animal crackers

when the world changed.



Secrets and lies dulled

the essence of her world where

cartoons and candy once

brought sunshine and rainbows.



Folding the picture,

she tucked it away for when

she would need a reminder

that she had been normal once.

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  • briareus gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    Quest for normality ( = what, need some?) and/or innocence, as in 'The soul of sweet delight can never be defiled' by William Blake, or opinions of 'Mark Anthony, King of Denial.'


  • infinite spirit
    August 19, 2008

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    A beautiful piece, and somewhat chilling in it's honesty. it makes me want to go back in time somehow. and it makes me want frosted animal crackers...