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A Writing Release

The blank page on which I write

 is a reminiscent shade

  of your light flesh canvas.

If my tongue were a pen

 I'd write you a masterpiece

  dropping vowels like bits of ice

    traced in calligraphy designs.

The texture of goosebumps

 define the next line.

   At the prompt of your moans

     I would push my thoughts inside.

Will you take in a breath,

 as my alliteration takes focus

   placing a fuse to my muse

    and tickling you in surprise?

The peak of this piece

 will inspire your body to sing

   raising up in mock protest

    at the delight of collapse. 

At the final line 

 I'll make a point

   to end this with a sigh

     and sign my name inside. 

 

 

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  • I think this poem contains beautiful imagery and feels sensual.. thankyou


  • Solidified
    August 12, 2008

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    mmm what a delicious play of words. Absolutely left me wanting more. Don't know if you are a man or a woman, but since I am a woman I read this as if a man wrote it. I like how it doesn't appear to come from either sex, which leaves it up to the readers imagination. With your ability to pen the imagination runs wild, believe me.


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    August 12, 2008

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    Soooo, loving a writer is so much fun! This is simply brilliant....*rest of comment deleted for content*