I cant fucking sleep
its pissing me off real bad
i have to get up at 6 tommorow
and its fucking 12 something now
damnit
i just took some sleeping pills
i hope they kick in
fucking cause im tired as hell
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Written January 14th, 2004
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hilarious
LOL yeah i did that a lot stayed up late..n sometimes i didn't mean to do it...i just couldnt sleep...this poem is funny..just the way you sounded when you were angry...great job -
Ha ha ahahahaaha....I love this poem. It reminds me of every single f*&^%^# night of my last year of highschool. NO sleep at all! THis poem was awesome because it was so real and I think (this is going to sound really cruel and horrible and mean and critcal) that alot of poets on this site are not being genuine and are just creating rhyming cliches about nameless, faceless things that they don't really understand. I'm not trying to be too critical and I'm also not saying that I'm not guilty of this either (have u read some of my crap?) but I real want to encourage everyone to write from their heart and stop relying on tired phrases and ideas. That's why I want to applaud this poem, because it is genuine and not based on about a thousand cliches. P.S. everyone is really talented on this site...i didn't mean to offend
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Well this is just showing you vent and it's good for what it is but i think you need a reason for not sleeping what is that factor keeping you up your mind a mistake...what? Otherwise a good start i liked it,lots of desperation.
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