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pure moodiness

terrified i may be, but then again
maybe im not and this will all end

so scared to bring life into this world
i cant do that im just a little girl

i tell my boyfriend i think its my ex
it kills him to hear me and him had had sex

but he takes my hand and looks in my eyes
'ill be with you even if it aint mine'

so happy that he seems to understand
so glad to have found this wonderful man

at such a young age i must look so bad
when he whispers baby please dont be sad

i cant ask him to stay i say in return
he just smiles and says i stay where my heart yearns

so here i am crying these tears
not cause of what i may lose but for what is right here

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  • Meroza
    August 13, 2008

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    aw, its the babyes fault you're all moody. Be glad your guy survives it because it will get worse. And the yearning for that one food! Stay strong dear, I am sure you will be a good mother. Like all of us, you have to learn and if you feel like your failing and not being such a good mother you hoped to be, dont worry. We all fail and learn, and your child will love you anyways.

    Best of luck, in both the contest and with the new one on its way.

  • Judith Chandler
    August 12, 2008

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    Well, I don't blame you if your mood is "quirky" to say the least. You have so much going on in mind and body. I hope it all works out for you.

    Best.
    jjj