On a midnight trip to daydreams
light years away
I lay to make plans for yesterday
Reflect upon the lonely pillow
Tumble and turn in a galactic billow
Let my body free
To float and be
what it will be
I laugh and dance, I am me
Free from forced grace
Till I awake
From turning cartwheels
deep in space
Author notes
This was fun! Love the prompts.
A contest entry
- 24 Hour PIF - by Bear - by Arkbear.
500 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is great
I believe I have been there and done that hahaha keep up the good work here
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WONDERFUL
Such a sweet flow of magic and happiness...shall we dance upon the moonbeams of yesterday and laugh with the light of midnight as we watch ever so close for a new day
Niaish for the smile
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so much fun can be felt within this write
you did a wonderful job with the prompt
you picked.
Riftkin
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A delightful and whisical write.....truly intouch with fantasy......not sure how you make plans for yesterday, but I enjoyed this.....I'm glad you came out to enter....good luck and God bless you!
Bear ~
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Cartwheels in space.
I rest my head on a billion stars,
Jesus Christ! Now I remember where I was
the day Buddha, sat beneath the tree!
Pomies, (people who write poems on AP.) Are good
very good!
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