Mood: good
Alert and satisfied
Putting things together on the screen.
I'm in the moment.
Body: Stiffness in the back
from bending and concentrating,
filtering out the surrounding
sound on the street.
I'm at an open door facing
a sidewalk. Shoppers pass up and down.
Cars pass on the street and trucks,
a distant roaring.
Mind affects body and body holds mind.
Right now, that's not unpleasant.
There is an absence of anger
and medium wellbeing.
Not thinking about things to be done,
and, I can honestly say,
no dissatisfaction
except over typos
but I'm catching them,
as far as I know.
Author notes
It's typo free.
A contest entry
- How is your mood? Quicky by Meroza.
300 points, ended August 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
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this is a well described piece,good one to share as it boosts our moods too, thank you and good luck
Linda
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Haha, this one is hilarios! And made me wonder if your at work while being here on AP
Bad! Tihi. Hope you shift has ended and your at home being on AP 
Best of luck
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I like how you have expressed yourself withe ease..All the best in the contest Judith!
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ah, this is a nice way to start my morning - on a positive note. Yes, nothing like being in the moment of creation to make you feel okay.
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Hee..Hee.. that's my mood, too, great write, good luck in contest, I think any writer from a big city knows what you mean.
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