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The Cab Ride

Strolling thru the city with the summer's sun on my skin
Is where this devilishly-delicious, naughty tale begins
I, with my boy toy planted firmly on my arm
Sat on a bench, spread my legs and let him play with my charms
Those all around either looked away or stopped and stared
Some even blushed, none could believe what we dared
Jumped up with a giggle and bowed for the crowd
Pulled up my skirt, showed my thong as I laughed out loud
We ran hand and hand to the curb to signal a cab
Jumped in the backseat of a turban wearing Arab
"Once around East and West River Drives"
"Ending up back here, we should arrive."
I slid in my seat and put my feet on the glass
My lover glided my thong across my puss none too fast
The driver in shock, adjustted the mirror to see
Pulling my thong to the side and shoving three fingers in me
As I opened my blouse exposing my ripened breast
The Cabbie turned his head around, for traffic came to rest
My lover slurped each nip as he practiced sign language in 3-D
Wetter and wilder, huffing and puffing, I climaxed 1-2-3
Removing my feet from the glass, I grabbed for my lover
Pulled out his dick and opened my mouth for the cover
I relaxed and hummed so I could take it in deep
My lover stiffened even more as the Cabbie still tried to peep
Taking his cock firmly in hand, I nibbled his knob
Masturbating him roughly, I swallowed the oozing glob
With our orgasms over, we fixed our clothes
And with a haunghty little glance at the Cabbie, I struck a pose
With a smile and a wink he announced we would soon be there
We arrive where we started, oh what a hell of a fare
Then I say,"See ya Cabbie, thanks for the trip."
"Oh by the way, I'll leave you my thong as a reminder and a tip."

Author notes

In no way am I trying to disrespect Arabian people. It just so happens that the cabbie was one, so I threw it in there cause it blended so well. So If you can't tell by now, Yes this is a true story.   #6
Written January 13th, 2004

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007
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    hot damn girl that is one great treat for me to read and a wet tip for a cabbie.

    Riftkin


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 8, 2007

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    Well done with this one!
    OOOHHHH LAWD!
    That was quite a cab ride you had there.
    I love the imagery in this.
    Great work and best of luck to you in the contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • Darc Raven
    August 8, 2007

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    Oooo, kinky! hehe. Sounds like a ride i'd like to take.. very thrilling to read, and turning on as well. Nicely written. Goodluck with the contest.

     ~Darc Raven, the bard


  • countrybabe gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    Nicely Done

    This is very nicely written. I liked this piece. Well done and good luck in this contest.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 8, 2007
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    oh la la Very hot.
    Nice sizzler.


  • slipperssun gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    lol i just loved the flow of this one... well done and what a fun ride it sounded like...good luck in the contest
    cheers
    jen


  • cali951
    August 8, 2007

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    Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk

  • cali951
    August 7, 2007
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    wow that must have been a crazy trip lol


  • AutumnsFlame
    May 12, 2007

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    Um.... ew.



    Good Lord!.... I don't really know what to say about this other than DON'T DO IT AGAIN< YOU NAUGHTYASS!!!

    haha Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.


  • BabyDut
    August 1, 2006
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    so dareing you are, I can't even really kiss my husband in public, (UNLESS I WAS DRUNK) much less give him head while some arab was watching. I have always been for his eyes only, but there has never been a time where I wanted to go else where, but its a road of trust and truth, and you and your toy can really say you have shared it all. LOVE the writing...


  • January 22, 2006
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    True story, eh? Damn, I'd have to say that this is one act I have never had the opportunity to try, though I don't live in a big city so we don't have many cabbies. I will keep it in mind for my next trip though. This was a pleasure to read; everything just flowed along at the perfect pace as my eyes crept across each magnificent line. mmm, I am still picturing this.. I may have to take a break before reading more entries. Thank you for entering.

    B


  • ronnie62
    September 7, 2005
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    What a trip.


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    July 24, 2004
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    That's right, you haven't had the pleasure of seeing me in action at a party yet but I'm quite sure you've heard stories....lol Hugs~Cuddles


  • July 24, 2004
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    loved it

    i really enjoyed your poem! even more so that i know you on and off of the net,so when you say it's true story i have no choice but to belive you! who would ever have thought that life could be so poetic.

  • ms-cuddles silver member
    May 14, 2004
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    Thank you for your support. Much Love~ Cuddles

  • Undercover911
    May 14, 2004
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    This was a hot write,you definetly deserved to place
    Congratulations
    Love,
    U911

  • Tu Leona
    May 12, 2004
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    You're serious it's a true story. Damn! I'm not that daring, but well, we all can't obey the rules. Nice Write.

    ~>Tu Leona<~

  • travisattva
    January 16, 2004
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    Messy!

    Though the flow of your writing can be awkward at times, I always read your peoms with a raised eyebrow. Quite the immagination you have.


  • January 14, 2004
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    Wicked thoughts, very cute the way you collated this one. Sounds like you two like a little fun now and then, Devil on one shoulder Angel on the other (winks)

    A great sense of love and play within this one atop all that passion. Enjoyable read indeed, one that raised many smiles here.


  • mendee86
    January 14, 2004
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    A TRUE story? Wow, that just completely adds to this poem. It was awesome..discriptive, and very erotic=) Great job. I think I've got to go um, clean my room now...

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