I surrender myself
and I give it to you
do anything in the world
that you need me to do.
Rub your feet,
brush your hair
run out to the store and buy you a card and a bear
just to show you how much I care.
You are my heart and soul
I love you despite the actions you show.
With this ring on my hand
I am devoted to you
you're the only one in this world
that I would ever call my Boo.
A kiss from your lips
is like fireworks in my eyes
telling me that within time
you will be all mine.
Be my husband as I am your wife
we know it won't be easy
and we'll start to fight,
but our love is hella strong
and it will see us through.
You are my inspiration
I write because of you
you bring tears to me eyes
and help me speak the words that are so true
I am devoted to only you
because you hold the key to my heart
It's been like that two years ago from the start.
I knew we would be together forever
and forever doesn't end today
I dedicate my work to you
you're the only one I trust enough to open up to.
A contest entry
- Help me believe by schellou.
330 points, ended September 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Where are the good guys? by tearyeyedbutterfly.
600 points, ended September 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a lovely poem, nicely written! Thank you for your entry.
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Good luck

