Velvet fluttering,
pirouettes from limb to leaf~
macintosh dangle.
Crimson sunset glows,
cool breezes sigh whispered dreams~
wooden rockers squeak.
Twilight’s curtain calls,
flittering fireflies dance~
lover’s hands entwine.
Author notes
Contest: Option: Triple Haiku (Something beautiful)
In a list
A contest entry
- Double Tanka - Triple Haiku Something Beautiful by InBetweenThoughts.
1000 points, ended September 25, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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goood haikos
reallly soooo sweeet haikos... love them and hoep you do more to add best friend...
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Thank you Afzal, I really appreciate you taking the time out to leave such wonderful comments on my poetry!
Thank you!
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A chain of Haiku's that dance upon the mind .. what more can a poor lost man wish for.
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lol Ahhhh a poem that danced upon your mind, what more can a girl ask for?
Thank you for the lovely compliment on my haiku! -
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I can think of plenty of things a girl could ask for
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Oh.. you bad Brother you! Unless you were talking about cookies??? then my bad!
oops!
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COOKIES .. Where, where, where.
gimmi, gimmi, gimmi
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Stunning images, what else can I say? Just lovely
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Thank you sweet lady!
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Beautiful Imagery!
Thanks for sharing such gofts within the portraits you paint with pen. You share so much imagery within my friend. Much love and light, and all the best to ya in the contest! 
-Timothy
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I loved the alliteration in ,"flittering fireflies". Wonderful Haiku chain! I don't know why I don't write more of these myself. Good luck in your contest!
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Thank you Sam for the lovely compliment
You know what? You should write more of these!! Nudge nudge..
Thanks again, it's always so nice to hear from you
Linda
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You have created beautiful imagery with these Haiku.
Well expressed and well worded.
Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment my friend!
It is always so wonderful to hear from you
Linda
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Sigh~
I don't know how you do this, bff
Fit so much beauty and say so much in so few words....I still haven't attempted it
Amazing...as always
But everything from your pen is
Lynda
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Thank you so very much my dear friend Your comments mean the world to me
Jazzy
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