She carries
her own rainbow
as she walks winters
way to brighten
a dreary day.
Author notes
Picture A
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXV - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Sunshine
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: as she walks winters- for some reason as soon as I read that line- kept getting reference to Washington- also phrase: my baby- and strange as it may sound- getting phrase: Sunshine on my Shoulders- from a John Denver song- and also getting word: Connecticut- after reading again- I am given word: paraphernalia- and what looks like scrapbooking materials- but also being shown reference to magazines-hidden under bed whether Yours or another persons- but shown that- now strange as this may sound- I'm nudged to mention- neighbor with the shifty eyes-(male) like caution- also given image of what appears to be a bong- Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Magnificent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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very pretty. I like that picture too. I love the image your poem creates even aside from the prompt.
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what an excellent take on this prompt...your words reflect the sunshine she brings. I like the place your journey takes me.Thank you Good luck in te contest.
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Great!!!!!
Hey DAvid...Great depiction of the picture which by the way I love!!! I think sonow is the most beautiful weather of all!!!! AGain very well done once again!!!~~Toni~~
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